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Составьте 6 предложений на английском языке по содержанию выбранного Вами фрагмента текста. По размеру фрагмент должен быть примерно 1 стр. в word'е, кегль 12. При необходимости можно отмечать границы своего отрывка прямо в тексте. просьба Олегу: пожалуйста, больше не мешайте мне. 21.30 Такое больше не повторится =) 22.21 At the end of 2011 Mitnick was released from prison to freedom . __For it brought pledge "FREE KEVIN" fund__. непонятный порядок слов At Freedom, Kevin paid each month for $ 125  to  +the companies that are affected by his activities. Kevin admitted that he was guided by children's curiosity, and he never wanted to steal. In addition, Kevin admitted that he +had hacked into the computer of J. Lukas and +had read the script of “Star Wars” before they are were released. In January 2003, the TechTV channel TechTV organized the __broadcast__ в смысле? with Kevin, Steve Wozniak, Shawn Fanning. After that broadcast, __he__ кто из них? decided to devote himself to protect ing people from hackers.
 * С начала главы " Хакер на пенсии "**

Aleksey Tsykarev 4 - - в следующий раз будет тройка

С начала главы "Битва гигантов" до "В списке подозреваемых.."  One of the most interesting oppositions in IT started at the end of 1994. Kevin Mitnick challenged Shimomura, who was the one of the best IT security experts. When security specialist was in Nevada, Mitni hacked his computer and downloaded secret information. Shimomura couldn't find the hacker in his hot pursuit. But Mitnick sent offensive messages to the expert. That's why Shimomura decided to revenge. He __recovered the course__ в смысле? of the attack and was delighted by hacking technique of the unknown hacker. So, he started searching of for this hacker in common together with FBI. user:Kurorisu 5- старайтесь составлять более сложные предложения

C начала текста до " Тогда же он взял себе ник Кондор ... " в главе "От телефонов к компьютерам"

On August 6, 1963 in a poor family Kevin David Mitnick was born. оба обстоятельства лучше переместить из начала предложения в конец. Many things were inaccessible to him, therefore he tried to receive them illegally, for example he forged tickets and went by the bus across Los Angeles. Also he __loves__ loved tricks. In 70s PCs haven't been were not __extended__, расширенные? therefore beginning hackers were engaged +in phreaking - __free of charge called and joked of people by the phone__, здесь что-то неверно с порядком слов, частями речи, и выбор слов не вполне верный and Mitnick wasn't an exception. When computers began to be widely used widely, Kevin started them to study them diligent ly and in 80s cracked a school database, so he has deserved recognition in the __arising__ поднимающейся? hacker environment. On computer courses he has found out vulnerability in an operating system and has got access to all privileges in a network. After that Mitnick has got a job on elimination vulnerabilities. Then he took to himself nickname Kondor. Я думаю это "Condor" 1331367361 3

С начала главы "Суд" до предложения "А ведь если бы я не нашел этих дыр.." The lawsuit of Kevin Mitnick was the loudest __in the case of__ непонятно hackers, and authorities __had to make such decision that to other hackers it was not good__. Женя, это как-то тоже непонятно I t always happens in life — the show lawsuit is the most strict. 23 accusations of fraud with +the use of computers have been were presented to Kevin. The Judgment was very severe and has surpassed all expectations, even murderers received softer punishment. But Though Kevin didn't kill anyone, but he was more dangerous than any innate killer. In a the case with Mitnick, authorities were faced with cybercrime, known for them only under from fantastic stories. 1331372579 4 - - как-то особого прогресса не наблюдается :(

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The litigation of Kevin Mitnick was the loudest among legal cases of hackers, and authorities was necessary to take such decision that other hackers not followed the example of Mitnick. It always happens in life — the show lawsuit is the most strict. 23 accusations of fraud with the use of computers were presented to Kevin. The Judgment was very severe and surpassed all expectations, even murderers received softer punishment. Though Kevin didn't kill anyone, he was more dangerous than any innate killer. In the case with Mitnick, authorities faced cybercrime, known for them only from fantastic stories. 1331708724

С начала главы "Суд" до "хорошенькая компенсация получается.."

The trial of Kevin was supposed to be __indicative__. это в значении "быть индикатором", Вам нужно слово "demonstrational" Having Faced with cybercrime, the government decided to make a harsh sentence. старайтесь употреблять "face" в активном залоге. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">And Kevin was __a long time__ in a prison cell for a long time, without a computer and +a phone. However, during his imprisonment __was organized by the Fund for FREE KEVIN.__ здесь неверный порядок слов The hacker was released early, but on condition that he would pay $ 12 5per month to +the companies which he hacked. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">//Галя <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">4 <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">попробуйте писать более сложные предложения

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">Перед Заключения

<span style="background-color: white; color: #0000ff; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">Later the second Mitnick book “Art of Intrusion” was written. As people say, Kevin honestly paid 500$ to hackers, which who gave him some information about their famous cracks. According to the saying “the best cop is the former thief” success is waiting +for Mitnick in his new work perhaps. Indeed, there is one thing to tell: Kevin can teach IT-security specialists some hacker things.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">And the question “who will be the next king?” is relevant again. In the principle we know the algorithm: it is necessary to have royal list of __victory__, victories but don’t one should not use it for selfish goals, to win Mitnick __(the amount of people, who wish to have the competition with him like the competition of Mitnick and Shimomura, is enough)__ Тёма, тут я Вас не поняла :( and to be captured… <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">Смирнов А 5 - -

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__<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #0000ff; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">the amount of people who wish to win Mitnick is enough __

<span style="color: #18181b; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">Извините, я только сейчас приехал из дома, у меня нет там интернета. Можно я сдам завтра письменно, или мне устно сдавать?? Олег. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">устное задание по этому тексту и так будет у всей группы

==== On the computer courses Mitnick found a vulnerability in the operating system and has had access to all privileges on the network. Then he took his nickname Condor, based on __the same__ неподходящее слово film of Sydney Pollack and Robert Redford in the title role. ====

<span style="color: #18181b; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">Олег
<span style="font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">(РАБОТА НАД ОШИБКАМИ) <span style="font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">the same film -- film of the same name <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Tahoma,sans-serif;">5 - -


 * Работа над ошибками **
 * Лучше размещать рядышком с первой работой, а то смотреть исправления неудобно. **

Kevin David Mitnick was born on August 6, 1963 in a poor family. Many things were inaccessible to him, therefore he tried to receive them illegally, for example he forged tickets and went by bus across Los Angeles. Also he loved tricks. In 70s PCs were not widely-spread therefore beginning hackers were engaged in phreaking – free phone calls and jokes on people by over the phone - and Mitnick wasn't an exception. When computers began to be widely used, Kevin started to study them diligently and in 80s cracked a school database, so he deserved recognition in the __incipient__ это как-то слишком книжно, но что-то ничего другого сама предложить не могу :( hacker environment. On computer courses he found out vulnerability in an operating system and got access to all privileges in a network. After that Mitnick got a job on elimination vulnerabilities.  Then he took nickname "Condor".  user:LenaBerezkina  Лена - молодец!