2.09

2.09 задание
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1.Болтунов Артем
Breaking in** to ** someplace isn't an easy task, it has its own niceties. Some people think, ** запятую не нужно ** that if a thief want** s ** to break in, he must sneak slowly in the darkness. It's not true. There are several ** pieces of ** advice** s **to those people, ** запятую не нужно **who want to break in succesfully. At first you should know a code of digital lock( or keys or lockpicks for usual locks). And the most difficult part of breaking ** +in ** is starting now. You should look natural to look like a legitimate ** who? **. You can do some work or pretend **+to be** busy. You attract s less attention when you look like a worker. Also you can get something from the fridge and if you are caught, look confused and apologize. You always must know what to say, if you are caught. And at last you have the goal. Break the safe slowly and carefully. Then take __money__ ** деньги тоже считаются ценностями ** and assets. If you find interesting information or documents you can make photo** e **s of this ** these ** (if you have a camera at hand). Use this ** these **rules to break in someplace if you don't want to be caught. Болтунов Артем

4 очень толково написано, но есть нехорошие ошибки

2.Daniil
Committing a larceny you observe some rules. Don't use spy mask. Be self- confidence .** confident ** You likely require breaking in the safety device (a combination lock) using secret code for the entry to the house. If somebody catches you, you should say that you come to visit your friend. You have to look like ** +a ** legitimate visitor. __Confuse** d ** works almost as well ** +as ** if ** +it ** were suspected__. непонятно For confidence you get a drink or yogurt from the fridge. If you were caught you just act confused and apologize like crazy for taking the yogurt. Find __a vault with the safe__ ячейку с сейфом? in darkness. You can use a small lamp. Create a special dust for ** the ** cracking the safe. Blow off the dust on a fingerprint scanner.Wipe fingerprint which lost ** was left ** on the scanner panel from the last time. Using received fingerprint try +to open the safe or repeat this ** these **actions. After opening the safe check the contents. Probably you find securities and money. Don’t bring take money if you want that your penetration be unnoticed. Learn the documents and make photos on your mobile phone if it +is need ed. Then put back all in to the safe and close it. Good luck! By Daniil I-Russian) 4+ С лексикой напутали, а в целом хорошо. )

3.Kazakoff Oleg


How to behave during a robbery. If you decide to rob something, you do not need to steal ** sneak ** into the house with a mask and other masquerade. You should not draw attention. After all, if somebody catches you, what are you gonna say? You should be very focused and act like a legitimate visitor. If you are nervous, you can give out yourselves. yourself In this case, take in the fridge any drink and if you're caught, you just act confused and apologize like crazy for taking the yogurt.

How to crack the old-school safes. Cracking an old-school safe is pretty tough but modern technologies make it much easier to break. If ** +it is a **safe with combination lock, it can easily be hacked using stratoskope. If //Kazakoff Oleg. 5-
 * +it is a ** safe with the scanner, it is also not hard to crack. ** +The ** Thing is, nobody wipes off a fingerprint scanner after they use it so what's left on the scanner, nine times out of 10 is a fingerprint. Good luck with a robbery! Немного не до конца.(

4. Артем Смирнов
1)Darkness is a good time which save** s ** your shady secrets. 2)Enter the unique code for successful breaking in** to ** someplace. 3)You should keep ** +to ** some rules when you be are inside. 4)You shouldn't look like a thief, because this behavior discover** s **your secrets.** запятую не нужно ** 5)In this situation your behavior is netural . neutral 6-7)You get a soda or a yogurt for defend ing (if you are caught...). 8)Before cracking the safe, you should defind +the type of safe. 9)You should invent a plan, how you do this - cracking the safe. 10-11-12)Use some special devices and __alien__ инопланетянский? fingeprint for your mission. 13)Open the safe and look at there. inside 14)Don't take away money, because somebody can understand that you was here . were there 15)Search yout __target__ ??? , there is a folder with important documents. 16-17)Take a foto on your mobile, this help you to prove some truth. Артем Смирнов 4-, ближе к тройке, ошибок многовато

5. Лена Берёзкина

 * 1) Many criminals commit a crime in darkness.
 * 2) Many criminals use different devices to break a password.
 * 3) +A Criminal should be unnoticeable, because somebody can catch him.** запятую не нужно **
 * 4) Also he should look like a legitimate visitor.
 * 5) Or criminal can look like he is confused, if he can’t look legit.
 * 6) For example +, he may take a yogurt from the fridge or a chocolate.
 * 7) If +a criminal is caught, he can __act confused__ странное словосочетание and make excuses for taking a chocolate.
 * 8) +A Criminal should have some knowledge and mother wit to crack a safe, because sometimes it is hard.
 * 9) But modern high-tech security makes cracking a safe easier.
 * 10) Nobody wipes off their fingerprints after they use a fingerprint scanner.
 * 11) – 12. So criminal can use +the owner’s fingerprints to crack a safe.

4+ всё очень элегантно, но нельзя окончание "s" и артикли забывать.
 * 1) When the safe is cracked, criminal should take all contents of the safe away.
 * 2) Criminal have has to use a flashlight to inspect content of the safe, because usually he works in darkness.
 * 3) If he find s some documents, he should steal it, because they can contain useful information.
 * 4) Criminal should have a mobile phone with camera, to take some photos.
 * 5) For example +, he can take photo of +the contract with insurance company.

6.Евгений Нефёдов
If you want ** +to ** make robbery you should observe some useful rules. Don't use any masks. Make robbery in a darkness. You should be self- confidence .** confident **. You should ** to **know a secret code, if you want ** +to **enter in a house. Else you must __breaking in lock__. pick a lock If somebody catches you, what are you gonna say? Say that you visit ** +the **owner of Евгений Нефёдов 4 Женя, Вы хорошо пишете, но очень невнимательно.
 * +the **house. You must ** to **look like a legitimate visitor until the very last minute. Confused works almost as well, if you were __suspect__. непонятно Take a soda from the fridge or a yogurt for confidence. If you're caught you ** are **apologize like crazy for taking food. Find necessary place in ** +the **house that you want to rob. You can use ** +a **small lamp for your work. Create a special dust for cracking safe. You should blow off dust on fingerprint scanner. After this, take off ** +a **fingerprint and try to open a safe. If all ** +is ** completed, you can get valuable papers. You can take money from safe if you want. Explore received documents. Take a photo of valuable papers, using mobile telephone or a camera. After ** +that ** quietly disappear.